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God's adventure to self-discovery

I like the Theme

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Act 3

I like the story. I like the pictures. You could improve your audio

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Week seven story board about slavery

I like the story. I like the plot twist. I think that the pictures could be better.

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Week 7

I like the story. I like the pictures. I think that you could have less background noise.

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Act 1, 2, & 3

I like the story. I like the. Some parts are too quiet and some parts are too loud.

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Week 7

I like the story. I like the action. You could improve the drawings.

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Ryan

I like the pictures. I like the that you talk loudly. I think you could have less background nois.

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Ahmik

I like the story line. I like the pictures. I would have something that caused the bisons to died

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4

I like the pictures. I like the story. One thing I would do to improve is to us spell right.

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Act 1, 2, 3

I like the drawing on the nation. I like the store line.

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Act 1, 2, 3

I think that one way you could improve is by having less background noise.

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Lil nee act 2

This is good

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Marcus Whitman storyboarding

Your idea is good

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Draw Your Life (Ted's Minor Beats - Act 1)

Your idea is good

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Act 1

Your idea is good

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"Pull" - ACT 1

You have a good idea

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Act 1: The Lonely Fish

I like your idea

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Cowboys

Your idea is very good

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Da Kine

Your idea was clear

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Lulus adventure

Your idea was clear

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Musical Challenges

It was clear

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Outline for the story “The Reptilian Vampire”

Your idea is clear

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Story spine

Your idea was clear

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TJs Desire

The idea was clear and the drawing is very good

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Jack and Jeff

This matches the story very well

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