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I love the strong motivations and character traits you've created for Mr. Snee. It'd be great to see these traits more strongly represented in how his character is visualized, if he's a "square" who always follows the rules, could his form be made up of more angular and squared off shapes? Could the way he walks be more stiff and rigid? The setting of the city inside the snow globe is really creative and unique. How did Mr. Snee learn about the snow globe but no one else did? I love the conflict b/w Mr. Snee wanting to keep the city save while also being seen as "cool" — if the choices that Mr. Snee makes to be seen as "cool" also somehow cause the city/snow globe to creep closer to the edge of the shelf (and danger) that would make for a really compelling story. Keep up the great work!

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Luis Character Profile

I love the duality you've created in Luis, loving and tender with his family yet aggressive when he's boxin. This creates and really strong connection b/w his "want" and his "need" — I'm really curious to see how you further develop Luis' character and the other people in his world. I'm also really curious how this story will ultimately end. Does Luis decide to give up boxing, does he find a way to continue his career but still overcome his inner demons? So many great directions you could take this story in. Amazing work!

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Week 2 | Character Profile for Electra

Electra sounds like a really compelling character. What would you say Electra's "true self" that she is trying to hide from the outside world? I love the idea of Electra and her 2D world interacting with the real/3D world, there's so many ways to create fun and entertaining interactions. One detail I found a little confusing is Electra's "want" — you mentioned a few different thing that she wants so it might be good to refine those to a single "want" that contrasts to the lesson Electra ultimately needs to learn. Great job!

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skelly : Returning in Peace

I love Skelly's design and outfit, instantly charming and recognizable. Your story also has a very interesting and original premise. One detail that could've come through more clearly is what Skelly "wants" vs. what he "needs." Skelly wanting to be able to rest in peace again is a very clear goal/objective for his character but I'm not sure I understand what lesson Skelly needs to learn on his journey to achieve his "want." Great work!

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Meet Kyota & Adrian

I love the very distinct and recognizable traits that make Kyota feels both futuristic and pirate-y. I'd really love to see how you can make some of Adrian's character traits more visible in his appearance, wardrobe, and mannerisms so we can get a sense of who he is just by looking at him. The body swap story sounds very fun, especially with how different your two characters are.

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Week 2 Upload (Sarah Estes)

Really great work! I love the very specific/distinct traits you gave your character and the fun nickname. It'd be great to see how her nickname "Journey" could be represented in her appearance. I'm also curious how the "creative block" could be represented, could it a person, some kind of spirit, or something else entirely?

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