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Week

Act 1-3

Why did they only work?
Good idea with the vacation
Good pictures
Good detail
Did the dad finally get happy?

7

Week

Act 3

Why does he hunt so much?
Some part were loud
Some parts are quiet
Good pictures

7

Week

Week seven story board about slavery

Less background noise
Good story spine
Who is her friend?
Good pictures

7

Week

Week 7

what is the manifest destininy.
Why is there a mail man
Good pictures
Good story spine

7

Week

Act 1, 2, & 3

Good detail
Good story spine
Talk slower
A little quiet

7

Week

Week 7

Blurry pictures
Some parts are loud
Some parts are quiet
Background noise

7

Week

Ryan

Some parts are loud and some parts are quiet
Good story spine
Good pictures

7

Week

Oregon Trail

Good idea
Good pictures
Talk slower
Good details

7

Week

Trail of tears

The pictures are kinda blurry.
Hard to hear sometimes.
Good story spine.

7

Week

Ahmik

Could you have less background noise?
Why did they run away?
Good pictures
Good story spine

7

Week

Act 3

Good drawings
Was there more history in the early acts?

7

Week

4

Where is the peice about the history?
Where did he get more gas if he kept running out?

You were loud and clear

7

Week

Act 1, 2, 3

Why were they rushed?
How did he put out the fire?
Great pictures!
Good story spine!

6

Week

Act 1 and 2

Cool

6

Week

Act 1 and 2

Great!

5

Week

Week 5

Good cliff hanger

5

Week

Act 1 Storyreel

Nice cliff hanger

5

Week

A Mysterious Mirror

Great idea

5

Week

lil nee

Good act one short and sweet

5

Week

Act 1 Storyreel for Luna

Super great detail and art work

5

Week

The Story of a Cool Colored Vampire

Nice story. Good detail

4

Week

Austin's Story Spine TW: Suicide

Good

4

Week

Alex’s Shadow

Super creative

4

Week

Toxic Perfectionism in Parenting

Nice drawings

4

Week

Week 4 submission

Very plain drawings try to spruce them up

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