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Kara Final Video

What a wonderful stroryboard, full of life witha that shading and colour palette. The story is nice but I would prefer if it was telled only with the drawings and the music. But in the end it is an awsome work and I really like it.

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Final Story

the drawings are very amateur, but also nice. The country music fits perfectly and I like the way the story is told

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Marcus Whitman

great story, excellent use of music. Needs improvement on stryboard (the drawings are nice but it could be better). But it haves his potential

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Gibby's full Story

I see the potential in this short, but it haves some little problems. The message is nice, but the microphone isnt in the best conditions to tell the story. It could have neen better if you used only the drawings to tell the story and discard the voice, the drawings of the storyboard are wonderful but a bit blurry. The music is great and fits perfectly with the storyboard.

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Trail of tears

the drawings are very amateur but I like that it is painted. The music doesnt fit very well but I like the sound effects, and the story is difficult to understand (for me) but I really like that you used voice acting.

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Julio

what a beautiful story, the storyboard was great, I loved the shades and how the music was acccompanying the ambience. To make this short stronger I would like to see better montage to make it more attractive

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Hunter Act 3 Draft

nice edition

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Flora and Fauna

nice drawings

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helping others

nice message

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Story Xperiential Week 7 Submission

i think that you may send all the three acts

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My Full Story

i appreciate how you told all the story in only 2 minutes

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Lux week 7

I like how you tell all the story only using 1 minute and 2 seconds, it is really dynamic

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Sharpie

Cute

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Act 1 & 2

Cute

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Julio Act 2

Cute

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A melody

Sorry for the 2 replies it was a mistake

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A melody

Cute

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A melody

Cute

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Act 1 minor beats

I love your art styles variation and how you tell all the story in 1 minute less

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Week 5

the drawings are nice and the video is well excecuted, but it needs more focus

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act 1

I Think it needs more focus

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Roommates Act I

I think it needs more light

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Act 1

I would like to see only the paper thank you. :)

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ACT #1 ANIMATION

I would like to see more colour

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ACT #1 ANIMATION

3 comments EXCELLENT DESINGS, ANIMATION AND VOICE ACTING

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