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Kara Final Video
What a wonderful stroryboard, full of life witha that shading and colour palette. The story is nice but I would prefer if it was telled only with the drawings and the music. But in the end it is an awsome work and I really like it.
8
Week
Final Story
the drawings are very amateur, but also nice. The country music fits perfectly and I like the way the story is told
8
Week
Marcus Whitman
great story, excellent use of music. Needs improvement on stryboard (the drawings are nice but it could be better). But it haves his potential
8
Week
Gibby's full Story
I see the potential in this short, but it haves some little problems. The message is nice, but the microphone isnt in the best conditions to tell the story. It could have neen better if you used only the drawings to tell the story and discard the voice, the drawings of the storyboard are wonderful but a bit blurry. The music is great and fits perfectly with the storyboard.
8
Week
Trail of tears
the drawings are very amateur but I like that it is painted. The music doesnt fit very well but I like the sound effects, and the story is difficult to understand (for me) but I really like that you used voice acting.
8
Week
Julio
what a beautiful story, the storyboard was great, I loved the shades and how the music was acccompanying the ambience. To make this short stronger I would like to see better montage to make it more attractive
7
Week
Lux week 7
I like how you tell all the story only using 1 minute and 2 seconds, it is really dynamic
5
Week
Act 1 minor beats
I love your art styles variation and how you tell all the story in 1 minute less
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