Dream

I love the voice!

Week 8 = Cactus

Great vibe!

Alex’s Shadow

I love your art!

Final

I like the sound effects. The story was a little hard to understand

rustacean journey

I love the colour: they are so colourful!

Danylo's world.

The whole atmosphere of your world is so realistic! I LOVE it! Not being affected by gravity depletion is a good or a bad thing in the eyes of the character? Does he feel left out from being different?

Fragmented Worlds (OMG)

This concept seems interesting. Due to the absence of background information I don't know the story. But the drawing itself makes me intrigued to see more.

My Character in his head

I just LOVE this idea! The colour, the mood is perfect! What does the little ghost-like things represent? Keep up with the work because I really love you story and I can't wait to see the suite!

Brandon in the Sun

I love the visual effect of this artwork! Does Brandon want to experience the sunlight? How can we depict his emotions from his facial expression?

Todd Astor

I love how the scenery is flurry, giving us a sense of motion. How can the viewers relate to Todd? What is he feeling at this moment?

Why won't you believe me? (Character in their world sketch)

I love how you made the girl and the furnitures in colour, but not the sister!

Week 3

I like the comparison and the contrast between her life and her image. Maybe you can elaborate on her feelings for this: is she guilty, or does her think that this situation is alright?

Julio

I love art style and all the expressions, I wonder how the story will go

Say Hello to Amaya!

I like her design and the challenge because if I’m in her shoes I just can’t make the decision! I’m looking forward for your final project

Character - Kalani

I really like the design, I’m curious about her backstory and how will your project develop base on this character

Character Design - Kara

I really love the art style, I think even though she’s a human unlike other team who may have made their main character a magical creature or some sorts, she has a very good story and things we can develop on, very good work

Character profile: Rock man

This is an interesting design, I wonder why there’s a face on every part of his body

Character Profile

I love the art style, it has so many details! I think her story is going to be intriguing

What if...

I love your art! Try to make this woman relatable to the population. If we don't self-identify with her, we won't be feeling anything when she sacrifices.

Week 1 What ifs

Hi! I think your 3 ideas are quite similar! I like them and I wonder how you can develop to make them more realistic/compelling! For example, what's the girl's background in the 1st idea? Is she an orphan? Or if not, will she miss her family? Why was she in the forest? You can also make something unexpected, for example, as opposed to normal belief, she became friend with the dinosaurs. Choose your favourite idea and try to apply my comments to anyone of your ideas!

week 1 assignment

The picture one reminds me of harry potter! I feel like the photosynthesis one needs more development to build a story or else it is not really interesting or compelling. I like the afterlife one but same thing: could you develop more? Does this person miss his family? Does he/she want to continue "living"?

Add a Title

Yes ; )