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Ferris & Gordon Adventures

I really liked your characters and how you introduced the problem of pollution

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Stella’s Spine Story

This is a great story to share an important moral. Your story spine flows very smooth

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Vlad's Story Spine - "Pull"

You do an awesome job of transitioning between acts and connecting your story spine!!

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Once upon a time...

You are able to show great emotion and tell your story spine and moral with simple illustrations. Great job!

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george’s story spine!

You did a great job at using something as simple as WD40 be able to tie your story spine ending back to the beginning.

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Lily in a new World

Wow, great use of color and line and the view point

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Celeste's World!

I liked the big elephant in the front and so many little ones in the back to show the distance

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Lev Williams at his factory

You used your lines and curves well there's good depth

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Jeff orey

I like how you drawn the city and the mountain in the background it really shows distance

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Forest

I like your good use of line and your view point

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Finley Aspen

Your illustrations show good emotions

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Hunter

You given a lot of characteristics to your character I can't wait to hear more

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Meet Molly! :]

Your illustrations show emotions very well

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If 1756 had electricity

I really like this idea. If there was electricity in 1756, then I wonder what other technology would've had by then

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What ifs video

I liked the 3rd one it was something about humans were reserected

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What if?

I liked the 2nd one it was about chess pieces lived in actual lives

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The what ifs

I liked the Roblox guy and the bed wars thing

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What If?

I like the 1st one it was about how our bodies could be customized ourselves like legos

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The Three What Ifs!

My favorite is the clouds are going to be our pet

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What if? -Neo

I liked the 2nd one because it made me wonder about what kind of species they were going to rescue

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