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Abducted

Wow It called me the attention the design so I watched it, I'm glad I did! cool story and It's something many people can relate with, in the searching of a loved one!

8

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Wolf and Dragon

Kayla.... I am speachless!

Well i've been recovering for this so now i have my words back!

Your artwork is stunning!!!
Since the first moment and scene I was immersive on your story! You have done such an amazing work!

The visual language story of yours is so wonderful! It is easy to understand! The character expressions are just magnificent! The poses, the lineart, the shadowing, the background, the character movement through your drawings, makes me feel inside this story. Wanting always to know more.
My congratulations and recognition for your work, hard and lovely work 💕

This story and characters are so compelling, they are readable and interesting.
You have done also an amazing job with the sound and music effect. It is ossom how you brought me from earth to sky through your characters nature. Flying, runing, even with fire!

For real my dear, I'm still amazed by such skillfull presentation and honestly I'm very glad I got to see your story💕💓 please keep in this path and giving us such wonderful moments with your art ❤️🤯✨🙆🏽‍♀️

5

Week

Act 1

Dear, wonderful act 1, I completly understand every step we were gien as learning experience and you put them into your own story so well!
The drawings are so expressive, and There was one scene in particular, the one she is in the car looking the building, I could really feel the building being huge and overwhelming! You are a great storyteller! Your narrtive and voice, i really enjoy it so so much.
The "every day" was so noticeable, I feel I could understand your character, as a dreamer, and loving the narrative and storytelling of that everyday and her expressions. I got curious about how this will develop so I'm going to be attend for the next act!!

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Croxi - Briar and Captain’s Adventure

I agree Richard, and thank you so much for you valulable time on giving us your feedbacks and challenge!!! We also wondered about the ending part, and it's amazing the process of storytelling and creating something that 4 weeks ago didn't exist! We worked on the purpose of treasure, and yet not really on the "Gem's story" and You have giving us a strong thing to think about! while developing the story it became something very different from the first rough idea, so it's been a creative process of discovering and rising up, surprises and decisions so, thanks again! and feel more than welcome to give us any feedback alongisde this journey!

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Croxi - Briar and Captain’s Adventure

Maurio, yes! Your perception and confusion is something that really shows the part we needed to work the most!!! we were wondering a lot about the "why" on this "But" also the ending, having a storyline, character and ideas on a teamworking, showed us momentum on our work in which we needed more time, and surely this is something we worked for this next entry you may be able to see soon. Is so interesting the feeling you are getting after watching our artwork, in terms of wondering and confussions also reflect the part we struggled the most! so we will surely give more time to those questions and feedbacks! thank you so so much!

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Croxi - Briar and Captain’s Adventure

Anna! We highly appretiate your feedback, actually it's been a feedback we have been receiving a lot, so is something surely we will work into our story! Soon you will be able to see our progress and feel free and welcome to give us your opinion so we can keep improving!

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Croxi - Briar and Captain’s Adventure

Thank you very much Malachi :) thank you for also taking your time on giving us your opinion and feeling about our work :)

4

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Alex's Story Spine

WOW! strong message, you went for really interesting topic and calling out for a self development, I really like this storyboarding from you! and the plot! the moral!
I think youw ent for a more realistic and calling to action story, and find it super original and needed nowadays! I can feel related to this story and also love the idea the ending was not the tipical "Happy ending", I love when endings lends you to take a minute of your life ,reflect and take an action for a change.

What I was unclear about, was I couldn't understand some words you were saying, may be, because my english is still in progress, I would love have read the description so I can follow also with that and make sure I got to understand everything, but this was just int he first part.
My suggestion... I would love subtitles heheh But everythign else, lovely and powerful!!

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Smoke Me - Story Spine

Woooaaaa I enjoyed so much your narrative and the storytelling of your submition! wow! congratulation for such a great work!!!
I really loved the story and DIDN'T EXPECTED AT ALL! the ending!!! woow!! I don't have any suggestion for now, I'm in impact right now hahaha, Loving your story! I also agree with Emma.... I find myself rooting the cigarette jejejje. Also loved how even loving someone doesn't need to be necesarily reciprocate, and that non reciprocity wouldn't mean part ways, but being as companionship from each other in another level or way than the romance :) At some point I must I admit I was feeling like the cigarette was stalking the Girl, watching all her life on a daily routine, I did wonder about the limits of that, and her own privacity, because she didn't know she was being seeing, and observer, I do know it was not your intention this topic, but from the field I came from, Those themes and topics makes me wonder about those kind of things. Lovely artwork! I'm rooting for you and want to follow your progress until the end!

4

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ELIXIR - Story Spine

Hey! Such a great storyboard and arwork here! I ADORED SUPER ADORED the expressions in every drawing!! I was amazed by it!! I really enjoyed! and the story!
From the hole story I was surprised by the moral of the sotry, I admit, I expected a realistic ending, and showing the death more as a character representing the wisdom of death, the acceptance of death, but it was good to see a different ending, I could reflect on my own expectation with a story like yours.
I would suggest show a little bit more of the purposes on the Death, why was after the father and wondering what is the purpose of elixir and life for ever, but everything else, i just adored it!

4

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The magical sword - Storyspine

Aw! Lovely Story! I was really curious about the story you will create and how you will put this into drawings! What I love the most is the Sword advicing the girl about her life situation.
What I find kinda confusing or unclear is something similar than Emma posted here, If the sword didn't want to fight, then why at the end was used by the same purpose?
A suggestion in order to make it stronger is using the metaphor as the "Confrontation" "Draw the line" "Putting limits" Swords can be used to reflect and show the importance how something that has edges can be used not only to cut and hurt, but to cut and put limits, draw the line until when and where a situation or person can get closer, is the power of saying "So I dont" "Not like that" "Not with you" and this could turn into an amazing piece for preventing bullying too, I think if you would refine this story adding many (just suggestion) this part, this would be much stronger, the magic of friendship that helps on putting limits"

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Week

Kyota & Adrian in World

Hey! I LOVE YOUR STYLE! It seems such a great storyline.
Before reading your writings, I was observing your drawing, to know what does your drawings says by themselves.
So I find it amazing the topics (elements such as clothing, character design, enviroment, clocks) and the contrast between two identities-one such an adventurer soul, daring to conquer and explore, while the other seems more introspective, and focussing in their inner self.
For me was the same character but in different situations. Obseeving the mirror scenes, seems like a crisis or a chaos something changed.

Then I read the description and realized it was a different being. So in order to make your one image tell the story and making it stronger, I would suggest, combine the elements, making the contrasta, like when in one image there are two people in the middle of the screen. Divided by a diagonal line from corner to corner. Both character ynited in the center but each one looking to a different direction.
So that would shows there are two characters and bellowe them, there is this character rexognizing tehmleves under another presence or being.

3

Week

Character in their world

Heyyy! Your art called my attention! First of all because was hand drawn on apper! And there is a light on the guitar that I really like! Because helps me to see inmediatly the main character!
While more I watched the image, the more I see there were elements connected between them, brcause the wires.
So I was wondering what's hapenkng, why everything is connected, what is the central element in the middle of the image.

Seems like a baby, but as an object, seems eyes, I wonder what all of them have to say, so for a next time, if you show a little bit more clear how they are related each other, would be amazing for your storytelling!

3

Week

"I'll see you guys in Spring..."

Oh wow, I loved the expressions and contrast of lighting.
I can really feel the longing, departure and a farewell.
The expressions guided also by the placement of every character are so well done.

The bear being in the dark corner, pointimg at being deep inside the cave, and the two other animals outside, i loved it!

I feel like one thing you can do in order to increade the tension in this piece, would be adding a base light grey background in the place were the fox and deer are standing at, because this will make the effect of narrowing our eyes.
Darkest grey=inside the cave (deepness and solitude)
Lighter grey=exterior (enviroment from the other characters)
Light color=characters desr and fox (co-protagonist) showing the place the deer wants to be at somehow.

So with this in mind I feel like this concept art will rock even more! Give me your appretiation about this and show me your latest creation!

3

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Future Selves

Heya!! I Loved the game with the sights form the characters I followed it as the whole storytelling. The main character going into a direction but foccusing their attention to the big one man/person. and this giant person point at another student with eyes that are directioned again to our main character, so then I go back to the center to see the other interactions, such the couple and the others tech people. I know whom the main character is because is painted.
One thing that can mek your composition stronger would be making all the secondary character blurry to give more contrast and make your character looking way more loneliness.
I would love to know more about this character and story and how will approach to the new major :)

3

Week

Merci à vous, mes dames et messieurs!

I just adored how everything is framed for us to go directly on foccusing in the harlequin! Loving the desing and elegant shapes, such a great gesture drawing! the expression and also after reading the story (I didn't understand completely how the text and the image were related, since i couldn't pictured the whole situation together, but each one by separated are wonderful!).
I really loved the way you used grey to make the contrast, I'm still struggling with it, so by watching your artwork, I'm learning already a lot! I'm studying your composition, and for example, making the silhouettes dark grey with a little ligther color in their edge and then blurring them! SUCH a fantastic idea!!! (Im really new into this kind of storyboarding, and study of color, so I found fantastic your artwork!!!!!! I want to see more from your art!!)
The whole drawing is amazing well set up, I can recognize the Eiffel Tower!and again, love the composition!! the background beingg rough but without blur effect shows is another important element in this story. Also having some other people on first plane close to us but in blur, makes me feel how the crowd are enclosing this harlequin, the expression of every single of them! even a dog!! you have put here different and such versatille beings, ages, roles, and your expressions, the way you put each body with an expression in their movement, find it just fascinating!
I don't really now what to suggest.
I'm now curious about why the Harlequin is there, what does wants to share with people :)

3

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Parten is Paid a Visit

Hey! Your artwork called my attention since the contrast between light and shadows where so strong, You have strong sence of them. Since It's the area I'm not sure about this really catched my attention! I clearly see the main three characters as some important event happening, surpressive since the lines from the edges seems to be narrowing them.
It seems to be a window, and element from an sportive person, but I would love to understand what are those three character represent, what does it mean those three balls, and the fact that there are the only elements with colors.
Since I loved the contrast, I could easlily follow the events, the person closer to us is the main character, and suddenly those 3 shapes/people or beings appeared.
But I got confused about their role in this storytelling, I would love to know what those people's intentions are, and what the does the main character is holding (it seems is holding something between their hands)
I would suggest clean a little bit more or finished a little bit more the object this character is holding, since can give us important information about what was the character doing before those three figures arrived.
I would love being able to understand what's going on without any text, so you image talk by themselves, and I clearly see that something unexpected happened, but not the why or their purpose :)

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Caelus: Week 2 Character

OOoh Loved the What if and this character design! The desire of wanting going back home and learn how to relay on people from the ground, Uf I enjoy and want to know more about it!

2

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Charactrer Profile by Nazish Naqvi

OMG OOOOWOOW! THIS artwork is incredible! so easy to follow, so incredible the shots, the composition and everything! what a great storyteller and visuals! Everything was so clear! and i can relate with the feeling of the fear of failure and embarrassment. Since this is a situation that frequently happens and could be a "Cliché" I would love to know and onder about how you will turn this story beyond something predictible or maybe not, I'm looking forward to see the develop of the story!! and I'm amazed by your art and skills of visual storyteller!

2

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Kirk - Character Profile

OOOO I love the Guardian of the Universe!! aaaaaaaaa A CAAT! LOVING IT SO SO MUCH! I love the guardian being a cat!!!!

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Pip, Age 14

Loving firs of all: THE WHOLE PRESENTATION OF YOUR CHARACTER! from the music, the character design and the description of them! even music!
Pip. Picking Identity and facing the need of choosing without being sure, Many of us will relate to it, I relate to it, so I want to know more about it and the process. Is somthing i'm rooting to see here in your story! Good amazing job!

2

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A PORCELAIN BIRD

Aww this is adorable! I like the combo between body and interior, what to do when your desires seems different from what your body or nature offers to you :)

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Week 2

Interesting character design and proposal! I also want to see how this story is going o develop!

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UGS Week 2

AAAhhhh I loved the idea the tree wanting to communicate with humanity! and "Touch the heart of the person" Lovely characters!
I wonder about the growing up story of the Twirl, What makes her wanting to communicate with people.
Nothing unclear by now :) wonderful job

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Zala

I loved the idea she is Shadow merchant! and the description so the drawing! I would love to know more about the connection between her and the shadows, seem very interesting!
For the moment i don't think there is something unclear, I'm expecting and willing to see more!!

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