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You draw and paint wonderfully. I love the muted color scheme. It feels that the story you will tell will be lyrical and nuanced. If you want more action in your story you may want to think about integrating a little amount of specific brighter and more saturated colors at key moments.

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I really see the dilemma in Caspian's eyes, posture and half smile. It appears he is really having a tough time figuring out how to really balance his needs and aspirations with everyone around him. This is a wonderful and classic theme. I immediately like him.

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I love your picture of the garden growing a person. It is creepy and wonderous at the same time. I would love to know how all the people from the garden interact with the people from from people world. My favorite is the ladybug on the moon, though. What does that ladybug do? How long does it take from moving from one crater to the next? Maybe at ladybug scale, there is so much more than we expect to see on the moon. Everything is ladybug scale.

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