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Ahmik

The use of music was very well done, and the narrator was very animated!

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The adventure of a hunky cowman

The narrator did a really good job, and I love the way you drew animals!

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test

I think this was the ending and not the whole thing, but I really like how you drew the the cat!

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test

I think this was the ending and not the whole thing, but I really like how you drew the the cat!

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Way Home- full storyreel

I LOVED this!!!! The art style is incredible and the character designs are beautiful, simple but not overly basic. The expressions are done incredibly well, and I felt drawn in. The story was written creatively, so well in fact, that it felt like something you'd see in theaters. This comment is getting kinda long, but I just can't stress enough how amazing this is!

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The Lonely Fish

I really liked the character designs! A mushroom jellyfish sounds really cool, and Bait's long tail adds a lot to the classic goldfish design!

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Xperiential All Acts

I will DEFINITELY be watching this when the short film comes out! I love this so much, everything about it is adorable and interesting! Ari is really cute, but I have two questions. What happened to their friend after they died? did Ari's friend live (With Ari as a roommate or neighbor or something) in the house, then sell it after Ari died? Besides that, it had an extremely satisfying ending and I just want to be friends with Finley and Ari in real life!

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Act 3 (Mars and Shock)

I'm in LOVE with this art style! It's so satisfying and just cool to look at. I haven't seen the other acts, so this may have been answered previously, but I was wondering how old Mars is because she seems a bit young to be living by herself, but this is a minor detail, so it doesn't matter too much.

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Lux week 7

I LOVE this art style! This is such a great plot idea, my only question is why the people glow? It's very cool but also seems a bit unnecessary (No offence meant) Outside of that I really like this story. It has a great moral and seems to wrap everything up well.

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My Full Story

I really like this whole idea! The narrator is a great voice actor. Everything about this is really cool and I kind of wish I could have my own dream fairy now lol!

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Story reel

I really love this whole idea and Lucy's character design! The only thing I don't like is how it feels a bit rushed and scattered, but outside of that i really like it!

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Story spine

Thank you!

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Story spine

I am still working some parts out, but thank you for the advice :)

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Ted's Story Spine

This has a really nice moral and Ted's design is very cute and well-done. I was wondering how hid drawings came to life? Do certain people have that power or is it only him?

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Lily's way home

I honestly can't think of anything wrong with this at all. You're a very good artist and your art style is adorable :)

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Julio's Storyline

Your art style is so pretty, I ADORE the character designs, and the plot is really cool. I was thinking that the whole astral project part of the story was kind of glossed over, and I think it would be interesting to see more of how that affects them, but other than that i think its great :)

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george’s story spine!

I love how everything ties together! It's a really cool plot idea, the kind that makes you go, 'darn, I wish I'd thought of that!' (Don't worry I wont steal) Your art style is very cute as well :) I was wondering why Sunny was more responsible? Is she older or something?

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Alex’s Shadow

Alex looks so cute! Their story is interesting and I love the shadow metaphor. I think the character designs go a long way and your art style is very cute :)

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Toxic Perfectionism in Parenting

I was wondering if there was a father in the picture, but other than that, this is an interesting plot and your art style is very cute!

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TJs Desire

TJ is a super cool protagonist. The moral is very good, and I usually hate the 'it was all a dream troupe' but you guys seem to do it well. Your art style is adorable btw.

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A magic story told between friends

I think this has such a cool story idea! I really like their names, and I think that the whole idea is really fun and interesting! Maybe speak up a little and don't add sound effects while you are talking but other than that I think it's great!

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What If

these are all super cool and interesting! How come only children have the ability to see mistakes, and at what age do you lose it? can they see other children's mistakes? for the second one, I was wondering where the things are being summoned from? Like if you wanted a stuffed animal, would one be conjured out of thin air, or is it taken from a toy store? And for the first one, I was wondering if you were choosing a job or a personality? And can you choose something like a princess, and you're born a princess? sorry this comment is so long, I just really love all these ideas :)

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What If Stories

the second and third are my favorites! I was wondering if there are any limits to what the vending machine can sell? Can it sell living things, like animals, people, or plants, or only foods and inanimate objects?

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What If Ideas

the first idea sort of reminds me of The Hollow on Netflix. I was wondering if everyone lives in a gameshow or just a few people. also, who runs the show and who watches it? And for the third idea, does the turtle ever get out to sea?

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What if...

The ideas kind of remind me of She-Ra (not that there's anything wrong with that) I was wondering why she had to sacrifice herself? and how did she time travel into the future?

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