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Earth's lament

The story is good. The animation is very good.

8

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The design is good.

8

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A melody

First of all, the animation is great. Not only is it smooth, but it also shows a lot of emotion. The story is very creative and interesting. It being a little longer would be nice though.

8

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Story Xperiential Week 8 Submission - The Story Of KiKi MauMau

Good voice over, good story. One problem is that there doesn’t seem to be a middle to the story.

8

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A girl who got cursed to cause an earthquake everytime she speaks

It’s kind of hard to read because of how fast the slides move by. The music felt a little out of place, a voiceover would’ve been nice.

3

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Danylo's world.

This picture is really well drawn and the silhouette of the guy does a really good job conveying emotion.

3

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Person

I think the image is a good visual. It is a bit confusing though. Is she standing on a meteor?

3

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Wyoming disaster

I like the use of color. I think the image could be drawn with more detail though. The Wyoming sign thats been slip in two is a nice detail and helps convey a lot of story.

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Juan Jose Singh's World

I like all the detail in the drawing. I am a bit confused bout what emotion this image is trying to portray. I suggest making it more obvious with different line shape and weight.

3

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Village on fire

I think that this image is really well drawn. I like the aesthetic of the burning tipi huts. This image really conveys a lot of emotion.

3

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Ari’s World

I think that the drawing is really well done. I can't really put my finger on what emotion you're trying to portray. I suggest making that more clear.

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Week 2 character profile

I really like how your character has a clear set of goals. Why do people ignore her?

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Derek Character

I like the idea of a character being in need of money. Is he obssesed with money, or does he need money to support himself?

2

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Character Profile

I like the accepting the past idea. What mistakes did she make in the past?

2

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Character Profile: John Sniffer

I like how the character has prostetic legs, thats a nice touch. How did he loose his legs?

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Week 2

I like how the character is conflicted. Why is he manipulative?

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Three what if's (cheese)

I like the third idea.

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What if

I like the last one.

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Three What-Ifs?

I like the carrot with prostetic legs.

1

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What if

I like the idea about gorrilas fighting in an MMA fight ring.

1

Week

Week one

The were wolves are a good idea, but how do people become were wolves?

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