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BONES

This was a very interesting and original story. I liked it a lot. The fact the grim reaper was a helper in the story was really cool. Great work this week! :)

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- Reflection -

This was a very relatable and interesting story. The perspective shot were also very impressive! Great work! :)

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An ode to loss

This was a very beautiful story. The images were beautiful and the music was very well done. Great job with getting the story across with out words. Very excellent work! :)

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Fighting the Light

This was a very interesting story, I never have seen anything like it, well done! The use of images and music was also very, very good. Great work this week!! :)

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Team 10

Great job! I really liked your use of music and sound effects, you used just the right amount. Great job again!! :)

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Amends: Act 3 + Act + Act1

Good job this week! :)

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Lil nee act 3

Good story I can’t wait to see how it ends! Keep it up!

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Griffin, Willow, and Their Furniture ACT 3

Good story! I think adding some character voices would be a good idea! :)

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Turtle Journey, Act 1, Act 2, Act 3

I enjoyed your story! I think adding some character voices and thoughts would be very interesting and add depth to the story. Great job! :)

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The Story of a Reptilian Vampire

This is super funny! I wonder why the crocodile was mean in the first place? Maybe add some more exposure of the character at the beginning. Great job! :)

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Jane against the world.

Very interesting story, nice work!

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Story reel for Act 1 & 2 for Aspen

Very good! I think adding some character voices would really add volume to the story. Good job!

6

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Story Thing Part 2

Funny story can’t wait to see more! :)

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Celeste Story Reel Act 2

Cute story. I wonder Why was she really busy and why the people really rule the kingdom? Good job! :)

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Act 1 & 2

A very good moral and it was nice to see act 1 and 2 connect together. I wonder do the fisherman and the robot become friends? Great job though!! :)

6

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Leone Act 1 and 2

I loooooovveee this so much! The art is so good and the story is wonderful. I think this could make a really great book or show! Keep it up!! :D

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Hunkiest cowman act 1&2

This is very funny and I love how the character narrates the story! Also the cows were very cute. I’m excited to see the friendship grow between the city boy and the cowboy. Amazing job!

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Act 1 minor beats

I like that there is music in the background. I wonder do all the trees have feelings or just this one? Great job! :)

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Act 1 beats

Aww the bunnies are so cute! I wonder why Jayce doesn’t want to go to the dance. Is it only because of the clothes or something else too? Great work though, keep it up! :)

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Act 1 minor beats

It was so cool seeing your work in the live! I wonder how the robot and the master meet in the first place? All in all, great work!

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Lily Act 1.

I was so excited when I saw your art in the live the one week! I wonder why lily’s people have to move to a new planet? Amazing job! :)

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Grimmhilda and Kid act 1

This story kinda give me undertale vibes lol. Very good use of character voices and sound effects. I wonder what bad things actually will happen when you say your name also how the characters got to this world. Good job, keep it up! :)

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Ryan

It’s so cool to see your story expanding through the weeks! I wonder how the tsunami got into the cave. Did they accidentally hit a water spot? Either way keep up the good work!

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STory SPine

I liked the visual of the anxiety actually being pushed into a bottle. I’m interested to see what crazy things he did that almost got him kicked out. Great work! :)

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Selina-Story Spine

Very good narration! I wonder what made the girls vandalize the school and be mean I’m the first place. It’s a very nice story great work!

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