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Dream Factory. Part 1.

I think the idea is super interesting.

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Act 1 Storyboard

I think it’s a really interesting way for the story to go.

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Lux Act 1

I think it’s a really interesting plot for act 1 and I like how it sets up act 2.

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Marx and his unwanted business

I like all your details on the skeleton, it helps me focus on where I’m supposed to be focusing.

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Lux's World

I like how much details there are.

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Jakob

I like your perspective on the drawing.

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Barnett goes to the shopping district

I really like your use of color.

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Jeff orey

I don’t know where you’re supposed to focus on in your drawing.

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sarai in her surroundings of epicness!

I like how you outlined the character so it brings your attention to them.

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Rainer Conroy

I really like the character design.

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week 2 submission

I like how many possibilities the story has.

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The Most Delicious Love Story

I like the idea for the characters personality but the confusing part is how he’s inside personality and outside personality are different.

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Character Profile (hopefully)

I like the character though more about the character’s personality.

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Pepi II

I like how creative the idea is.

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Pepi II

I like your creativity.

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What If Stories

I really liked the vending machine one, but I was wondering if it actually meant anything like philosophical questions and the meaning of life? I think it would be interesting if the machine was weighed down by the weight of it’s knowledge.

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What if...

I really liked the drawings, but I was wondering if dogs always had antlers or if they evolved into having antlers? I think it would be really funny if the cowgirl one was set in modern times

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What if...

I really liked your drawings, I was just wondering if she was immortal and just forgot her origins or if she was somehow transported there? I think it would be really interesting if she was immortal.

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