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What If

I love the "what if you had multiple lives like a video game" concept. I think about this all the time! This opens the door for many possibilities and questions, like...can you beat the game? Can you change character or a level? Is this similar to a VR experience or is the "real world" in any way similar to the game world? I was a little unclear if the drawing represented the home screen or the last moment of one of someone's "life's". Awesome work by everyone!

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What If

The what if that stood out to me was "what if there was a girl who had a friend outside the bars?" A newborn friend always opens the door for adventure, empathy and storytelling. I wonder more about what the situations are on each side of the bars. Is the girl trapped? Is she in some sore of confinement? I would like to get some more detail in this intriguing scenario. Visualized stories told between friends are very relatable and this concept infers there would be hardships, meant to be overcome by friendship. It's a very nice story to tell. Awesome work everyone!

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what if

The "what if" involving the cows was great! It made me laugh because I count cows while I drive and it actually makes time go by faster. I wonder if this power only applies to cows or if the kid can somehow manipulate it in some other way? What can this character accomplish with this power? Time-sensitive scenarios can be challenging but this is a very niche, unique and fun way to approach this. Nice work everyone!

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What If?

I like the "what if a 1,000 year old vampire adopted a middle schooler?" This idea makes me think of countless possibilities such as, will he/she/they turn the kid into a vampire too? Is the vampire lonely? Will the teenage angst clash with someone stuck in their centuries-old ways? Really cool options that can be created from this concept. I would like to know more about the vampire. Maybe an adjective between "1000 year old" and "vampire" would help give more depth and understanding to them. Nice work everyone!

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What if Project

I liked the "what if you had the ability to enter your favorite show"? I've wondered that on many occasions. I would like to know more specifics. For instance I'm wondering does this apply to live shows or would you be transported into a fantasy world (no cameras/production attached)? I would like to see more of the illustration and what show or world this person is transporting to. Really cool concept and opens the door for many possibilities and storylines down the road. Nice work to everyone all around!

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What If...?

Hello all! I love these submissions! My favorite "what if" idea was the "passing away" concept.
I think it spoke to me because dying is inevitable and two of the greatest questions is what happens right before we die and what happens after life? I can see many people wondering that and a movie showcasing one's most memorable moments is such a cool concept.
A similar idea was done in the series finale of "SCRUBS" (the better/real finale) so I would suggest to try and avoid similarities. The illustration made it seem the viewer was watching from a POV perspective, which in my opinion is better and disassociates from SCRUBS. Nice work on all of these!

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