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Act 1-3

Background noise
Speak a little slower
Good drawings
Good details

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Act 3

Background noise
Anton talked to fast
Good drawings
You spoke really clearly

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Week seven story board about slavery

Background noise
You were loud
Good drawings
Spoke clearly

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Week 7

Is this about manifest destiny?
There is a lot of background noise
You guys spoke very clearly.
Good drawings.

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Act 1, 2, & 3

Excellent work
Coby talks very slow and clearly I love it.
You had background noise
Colin needs to talk slower

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Week 7

Kameron needs to talk louder. Get rid of background noise. Good drawings. You guys spoke very clearly!

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Ryan

There is background noise. The volume was very different it will be very loud then very quiet. I like the drawings. You guys spoke clearly.

7

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Oregon Trail

There was background noise. Good drawings. You spoke clear!

7

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Trail of tears

There is a lot of background noise. There was a lot of reputations about getting food. You guys spoke very clearly. Good drawings.

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Ahmik

There called teepees not tents. There was a lot of background noise. Good drawings. You spoke clear.

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Act 3

You didn’t have act 1 or 2. Have it related to history. Good drawings. You guys spoke clearly and loud.

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4

Check your spelling. Talk more about the history of manifest destiny. You guys talked very clearly. Good drawings!

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Act 1, 2, 3

There was a lot of background noise. You guys talked very clearly and loud. Your guys drawings were good to!

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Act 2

I like the drawings and you have a amazing voice.

6

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Act 1 & 2

I love the idea it’s great you guys really executed (did it) really well.

6

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rock man opening acts

The story is really good a little more detail though.

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The tail of Inji

Why was the samurai in the bar other than that good story.

5

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Act 1

Very good story I’m very absorbed (hooked into your story)

5

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Draw Your Life (Ted's Minor Beats - Act 1)

Your idea is amazing your doing great so far

5

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Gibby's story: Act 1

I love the character and the story good work so far.

5

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Act 1 Storyreel

I love the idea great work so far.

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THE KINGDOM WHOSE PRINCESS WAS TURNED TO A WITCH

I like your story and drawings.

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Nathans story

I like the drawings it is a good moral and I like the color.

4

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Week 4 story spine

The idea you have is really creative and fun. Your story plot is really good.

4

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Story Spine

It’s a really good story and good drawings.

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