Act 1-3

Background noise
Speak a little slower
Good drawings
Good details

Act 3

Background noise
Anton talked to fast
Good drawings
You spoke really clearly

Week seven story board about slavery

Background noise
You were loud
Good drawings
Spoke clearly

Week 7

Is this about manifest destiny?
There is a lot of background noise
You guys spoke very clearly.
Good drawings.

Act 1, 2, & 3

Excellent work
Coby talks very slow and clearly I love it.
You had background noise
Colin needs to talk slower

Week 7

Kameron needs to talk louder. Get rid of background noise. Good drawings. You guys spoke very clearly!

Ryan

There is background noise. The volume was very different it will be very loud then very quiet. I like the drawings. You guys spoke clearly.

Oregon Trail

There was background noise. Good drawings. You spoke clear!

Trail of tears

There is a lot of background noise. There was a lot of reputations about getting food. You guys spoke very clearly. Good drawings.

Ahmik

There called teepees not tents. There was a lot of background noise. Good drawings. You spoke clear.

Act 3

You didn’t have act 1 or 2. Have it related to history. Good drawings. You guys spoke clearly and loud.

4

Check your spelling. Talk more about the history of manifest destiny. You guys talked very clearly. Good drawings!

Act 1, 2, 3

There was a lot of background noise. You guys talked very clearly and loud. Your guys drawings were good to!

Act 2

I like the drawings and you have a amazing voice.

Act 1 & 2

I love the idea it’s great you guys really executed (did it) really well.

rock man opening acts

The story is really good a little more detail though.

The tail of Inji

Why was the samurai in the bar other than that good story.

Act 1

Very good story I’m very absorbed (hooked into your story)

Draw Your Life (Ted's Minor Beats - Act 1)

Your idea is amazing your doing great so far

Gibby's story: Act 1

I love the character and the story good work so far.

Act 1 Storyreel

I love the idea great work so far.

THE KINGDOM WHOSE PRINCESS WAS TURNED TO A WITCH

I like your story and drawings.

Nathans story

I like the drawings it is a good moral and I like the color.

Week 4 story spine

The idea you have is really creative and fun. Your story plot is really good.

Story Spine

It’s a really good story and good drawings.