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ECHO

It’s an interesting story and I like how the voice of Echo sounds. Good job!

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Walk In My Shoes

It's well told and the story is interesting. I thought it was straightforward

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Lost and Found

It has a good amount of emotional moments that make it engaging and the use of music is good too. It’s creative and the frames are well done too

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A Pirate's Treasure

I like how it explains what’s happening well and the use of music and sound effects is good. The story is clear and it’s interesting. Well done!

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Omen, The Black Cat

That’s cool. I like the idea, the creativity, and think it was explained well

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Partners in Crime

That’s a creative story. The frames are well done and I like the bad guys falling in love

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BILLIE'S RITUAL

The story is interesting. The frames are well done and do a good job of showing what’s happening that it could be understood even without words. Good job!

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Eritrea Calling

I like the creativity and I think it was clear. Well done!

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Love and Death Full Final

I like how the frames did a good job of showing the emotion even more. The story is interesting and I felt it was clear. Good job!

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Upside Down to Right Side Up

I like the concept and the creativity. I felt like it was straightforward

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The heart of the mountain

That’s a creative story. It’s really cool and it’s straight forward

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Alien Reality Show

That’s interesting and I feel like it was clear overall

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Final Animatic

Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it and that it was clear!

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Sam’s Acts 1 Through 3

Yeah, that’s the phrase, but he didn’t make it back, so that’s why it doesn’t say it. He and his crew died on the moon, which is why the news report says they didn’t make it back. Thanks for the compliments and I’m glad you like the song I wrote.

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Cian and the Metaverse (Act 1, 2 & 3)

I like that. I think the storyboards help explain further what is happening. The only small thing I would suggest is maybe have a little bit more after they reunite. Like how in most movies, once the goal has been accomplished, there's a little bit of how things have been for them afterward. Like Finding Nemo, after they're back safe, it shows Nemo going to school again and Marlin now trusts that Nemo will be okay.

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Sam’s Acts 1 Through 3

Thank you and I actually wrote the music.
I get what you're saying. I'm trying to figure out how to have it work since the timing of all of it is with the music. I have an idea of how to change it, but I'll just have to figure out how to make it work.

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Storm Hero - Acts 1,2 and 3

I like it! It’s a really interesting story and the pictures for this are really well done! If I had anything to suggest, I would say that maybe the villain is learning to control his powers rather than them being less under control unless it’s maybe setting up another one because then it feels like he isn’t done yet. But it’s still cool the way it is too.

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Act 3 Mona

I like it! I like how the story is very relatable and how this is helpful for the kinds of people I was actually talking about earlier today. There’s a lot of pressure on these younger generations to know what they want to do and there’s a lot that’s expected but I’m glad you show how people don’t need to have it all figured out and it’s okay to figure that out as you go. I feel like it was all clear and explained well.

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Sam’s Acts 1 Through 3

At the very end, the rocket that goes to the moon is to symbolize his son following in his footsteps and it's intentionally a bittersweet ending.
I'm glad you realized the rose being there again. And I'm glad you liked it!

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Lenny and the Song of the Forest

I like the moral of the story and feel like it was clear what was happening. I like it!

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Act 1 & 2

This is interesting. I like the idea and think it’s interesting how they want to get out of there. It’s interesting that he got what he wanted but then wanted to get out.

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Acts 1 & 2

Yeah, I wrote the music.

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Acts 1 & 2

Also, I would suggest watching it on YouTube because it’s how it’s supposed to be on there. On here, it’s always off and I don’t know why. The link is in the description

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Acts 1 & 2

I’m sorry, but I feel that because they’re the ones shown after he’s gone, it should have them set up. It also mainly shows him with them when they’re in the scene, but at important parts for their character, it shows just them. I feel like if it was just focused on him, it would be a little confusing or harder to care for the wife and son if they were only briefly shown before he’s gone. Like if we pretty much only knew things about Mufasa, we wouldn’t have as much sympathy for Simba or Sarabi after Mufasa is gone.

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Acts 1 & 2

He's in his astronaut uniform in the water because that's what they do to prepare and yeah, the equipment he uses is exactly what they use when preparing.

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