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Intrusive - Final Storyreel

GREAT JOB AMELIAAAAAAAAAAA! LOVE IT

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Final Story

Great ideas! Try to find ways to make it more colorful and engaging. Amazing effort overall!

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Julio

Great job! Very cute story and very relatable. Love it!

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A World Without Shadows Storyboard

Great drawings and ideas! I love the character development; the main character is relatable!

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Lulus adventure

Great job! I love the drawings; however, some of them could use a little more explanation and I got lost in between. Other than that, amazing job overall!

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Derek and The Money Tree

Great job! Good ideas and drawings! Compelling story as well.

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Gold Rush

Great job! Love the music and creative ideas! Including the voiceovers. Amazing work!

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Our Final Story

Wow what a creative idea! Very interesting storyline, and good drawings!

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The Sunset Falls by Hanna Docampo Pham

Amazing story! Very creative and detailed. Drawings are amazing!

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Dream

Great work! I love the story and the drawings. I love the voiceover too! This is such a unique, creative story.

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Impending Death

Amazing drawings! Love the detail. This is such a unique and interesting storyline, and I was interested in it the entire time! The drawings were engaging and the storytelling was amazing. The characters are amazingly developed. Superb job!

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This is my final!

Thank you so much! This means a lot to me.

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Act 1 and 2

It is a silent story, and I will add the music later on. :)

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Act 1 and 2

It's supposed to be a film without dialogue, and I will add music and sound effects later :)

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Act 1 story

I love the character design! It is very creative and I can tell you put thought into the shapes in his design. Good job!

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Act 1 Storyreel

I love the character. She is unique and has a very interesting personality. It makes me curious as to what comes next! Keep up the good work!

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Maya’s Room

Good job! Love her room, it seems really authentic and cool. Keep up the good work!

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Brandon in the Sun

This is absolutely amazing! The visuals are incredible and it really makes me curious as to what this story is about. Good work!

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Ted's World

I love the pov, it really makes me feel like I am there with that character! It makes me curious to see what the story is about. Good work!

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Tristen Museum and city

I love this layout! I would love to see the character closeup in his/her surroundings. The textures are beautiful though! Love the uniqueness.

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PO’s World

I love this character design! Its so unique, and defintely a story I have never seen before. I'm looking forward to seeing the finished result, it looks so fun! Good work!

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Week 3 Drawing

I love this drawing, it's amazing! I love the textures and point of view. It makes me wonder who this person is and why he is walking through a dark alleyway. Amazing work!

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Juni Character Profile

Wow thank you so much! Means a lot

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Juni Character Profile

Thank you so much!

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Juni Character Profile

Thank you for the advice!

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