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Cowboys

Good job

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Act 1 and 2

Good Job

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Act 1 and 2

Good job!

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Week 6

Good job

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Act 1 and act 2

Good job, I really like it!

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Act 1 & 2

Stop you’re in this group

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Story board

Really good I like it

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Jeane's story: Act One

It’s very interesting but it is good

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The Princess Act 1

It is going to turn out amazing, nothing was confusing it was very clear speaking, good job.

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Story board on slavery

I like what it’s about, it dint really make sense though. And maybe you could make it up close so we can see the pictures because that would help a lot to see every picture.

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Dream Factory. Part 1.

I like it it’s really good, I like the whole thing. I don’t know if I found anything unclear or confusing.

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Terras world

I like the flowers, I think the green stuff is pollution.

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Where Stella Is

I really like your drawing, I like that’s a carnival with all the colors. The colors go very well with the theme of your story!

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The In-Between Place

I can tell what your story is about, he is either going to be in heaven or the other place but they can’t tell so he’s in both for now. It’s really good

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Flavio Vacazinha in the New world

I really like the picture, it’s really cool for what your doing for your story.

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Barnett goes to the shopping district

This picture is very detailed, the colors help anyone know what your trying to say (basically), the guy is sad so it’s shaded & blue. Good job!

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Shock in Color

I really like how the colors look really good together & you did a really good job!

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Mia

It was really good, Good Job! I don’t wonder about anything that you could change, & nothing was unclear.

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Todd Astor

It was really good, I don’t have anything that I think should be changes, and nothing is unclear. Good Job!

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