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nicely done illustrations. I like if shadows could talk it could be taken as a funny thing or a very very dark thriller depends on where you want it to go. I like the drawing one also that is a neat concept. Also it depends on the protagonist artist on how that person wants to use that power for good or evil. I sparks a lot in the imagination of where you want to take this.

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What if

Teleportation is great and has all possibilities of visiting all places and world and the learning experience is endless. I like the birthmark one too and how the person without one has to figure out who or what that person can do and will go through life learning what he/she can do and other people reaction if the find out that person didn't have the birthmark.

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What If?

wow all of them are great what ifs. I like the heroes replaced with villain that spark some ideas in my head just hearing it. I like the teleportation too and how there is a sense of unknown tension that the person could be anywhere and anytime and then gone. I places and time are limitless.

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What if ideas…

I like the secret academy and the twist that the person didn't apply. I brings in a sense of mysterious tension that makes you want to learn more.

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