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Character Profile from Team LL + the Cool J

Love the look of your character! The eyes remind me of one of my favorite singers David Bowie!

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Three What if's

The tech nerd in me loves the idea about climbing into your computer to take a trip. I wonder could you get to your destination by wifi signal? Would you hack into the terminal and use the command line to get to where you wanted to go? Would you need to exit through a computer screen once you arrive at your destination? Is there a network of these special computers that talk to each other? How would you discover that your computer was capable of doing such a thing? This could be an interesting adventure if you decide to move forward with it.

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Love the boba idea! Like David mentioned I see it as a comedy also. Some sort of wacky adventure story. I wonder what happens when they taste the boba. Do they become addicted and go to any length to get their hands on it? ( Like I do in real life?) Does boba start a war or make peace? Curious on how you might develop it.

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Hello👋🏼
I love the first idea. I wonder has the character spawned an instance of the sun above his head or is the actual sun above his head and no longer in space? Also how does the sun not incinerate the character? Does he have a protective suit that protects him from being consumed by fire? Life is going to really suck for this dude. You have many excited possibilities with this idea.

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Week 1 Deliverable

Hello👋🏼
I really like the idea of seeing feelings. It would be awesome to see what folks are feeling especially in situations where you're trying to get a job and not sure how the interviewer feels about you. There really are so many ways you could go with this. It's unclear if only the main character would have this ability or is it a trait that everyone has? Either way could make a good story.

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What If... Three Ideas by JC Holmes

Hi there👋🏼. I love the idea of a killer from a horror movie trying to reintegrate with society. You could go into a comedic direction or even a more dramatic approach. With a dramatic approach I could see the killer trying to adapt to this new way of life and having so many internal conflicts that he kills one last time. Himself. Yeah it can be dark, but the potential to develop this story into a super provocative, emotional story is there!

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